
(Ch 49) It's okay, but the author forgets a lot of things as the story goes. Aside from the main plot., that is, so while that's already better than most stories… it takes away a lot to the worldbuilding and cast. Also, while it's likely a combo of her education and being the oldest sibling who…

There's something off throughout, and it's not an intentional narrative choice or tone. I'll chalk it up as the author didn't really plan much out and would simply change what we already established. Despite that, it's mostly coherent and an okay enough story. But there is an unnecessary lull in…

Dropped years ago not too long after the stepson went back to school. He was really the only refreshing element lol Like, the story had some interesting lore that’s ultimately difficult to really care about beyond some taboo elements. All of which was needless concern if ML had 2 braincells… My…

It's not a savory cheese in things like cheese muffins… they're typically quite sweet, they're just not a macaron level of sweetness 😅