
Seeing as we’re talking about the duke, what she thinks is completely irrelevant.

How the hell was the ‘guarantor’ a debtor to the one they put a guarantee for…That makes no sense. Up till now it was made to look like her fathers friend used their fortune to get rid of his own debts, but somehow they twisted it into her father taking a credit with his friend? What is this…

Bad writing. 1) If he could control regular people’s minds to such an extent, why was he using such a roundabout way, instead of controlling the duke? 2) If he could even control the duke, then what’s the point of sending the girl away, and now after the plan to use her to lure them to the…

I don’t mean about his willingness to do that. I’m talking about his ability to do it and don’t have his authority/position hurt by it.

And what does she think she is if not a notorious criminal, assaulting a maid twice, poisoning a duchess and trying to posion an entire delegation from a foreign kingdom? At the point in time this is inspired on, she would be on a straight road to an execution stand. And as if a marquis could do a…

You infantilize teenagers way too much. If a 15 year old cannot tell that someone that tried to harm their loved one is not going to suddenly do anything to make them happy, then they are, lightly speaking, mentally slow. Also, a 15 year old can normally understand feelings. Their feelings may…